Informative Speech

For my informative speech, I researched the Saw Shark. I think my speech was alright but there is room for inprovement. I think i said "um" too much and i swayed from side to side too much. I also looked at my power point too much. Some things I liked about my speech was that I knew what I was talking about and I think I spoke clearly and with confidence. I liked this speech better than the brown paper bag speech because I do not like talking about myself. I enjoyed researching this fish and learning about it and then being able to tell my classmates about it. I need to work on my hook but I thought my conclusion was good.