Wednesday, May 26, 2010

Informative Speech VS. Persuasive Speech

For my informative speech, I had a lot of mess ups. I read of my notecards too much and said "uh" and "um" a lot. I also looked back at my power point a lot which also made me have bad eye contact. I had a lot of room to improve.

For my persuasive speech, I talked about cyber bullying and how big of a problem it is. I had a good hook and a good thesis statement. I had no hand gestures though because I was holding my notecards. I think my eye contact improved from my first speech but I still need to look at the sides.

Tuesday, May 11, 2010

How to French Braid Hair

Strong Points:
  • I had a loud voice.
  • I spoke clearly and with confidence.
  • I thought I explained the steps very clearly and demonstrated well.
  • I told the class why I chose to learn and teach how to French Braid hair.
  • I was the only one in the class who chose that topic.

Weak Points:

  • I took long pauses during my speech while I was braiding.
  • I did not look at everyone while I was giving my speech.
  • I had my back to some people.